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Please... wake up...

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What if Ilia really did die form that arrow!?

because of Christmas, I been pretty busy these days, good thing I had the chance to at least finish this drawing... and now off to write Cedric's bio!!!
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I really, really like how well you drew Ilia and Link. The shading, most of the proportion, it's quite semi realistic here and I think you did well using it.
I also like that you drew the triforce in Link's arm, clearly identifying how he is, as in the games, and how well you drew Ilias chin facing up-for some it's hard to draw characters at that angle. Link's nose is another very good example <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>
There's a few things that bugged me about this picture, however.
I don't quite understand how Ilia could die if blood's just coming out from her arm {I read your description}
Either she bled more than is shone in this picture or it's simply been left unrealistic in the sense of her death. One can only die if it's shot in a viral organ or if they bleed to death, and here Ilia simply looks unconscious from her wound.
Another thing I noticed is that Link's hand seems a little off in size-it's too large. If it's shrinked down a little it'd look better.
Link's facial expression is another thing in question. In my opinion I think Link should have his eyes closed and gritted teeth to show his anxiety and depression-besides the tears Link looks more surprised, like someone had scared him from behind. And his mouth hanging open makes it more so. If his head was bending more toward her it would also give this picture more of what you were trying to draw.
The last thing I'd change-the brightness of the picture. When you're going for sad emo depressing horrifying stuff like this, especially this elegantly drawn, the white should be a bit darker to emphasis this situation.
I hope you don't feel too down, I still really like this picture. It's a wonderful piece and I hope I've been of help to you <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>
Keep up the good artwork <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>